In a Rainy Evening

Here I am seated still; 
listening to the song of the rain. 
acrobat Swallows dance in the grey sky;
the heavy black leaves, laments quietly.

“Chagall” painted in blue.
It’s the colour of “Love” You said,
with “Starry night blue” eyes
turning my sky in to blue,
“blue” is eternal, I thought.
Ignoring, the blue sky turning to peachy orange
suddenly, bursting like a symphony,
appeared vivid shades,
“ the colour of hate”, “the colour of lust”
“the colour of fear”, all strong brush strokes,
 painting the rough edges of life.

yet here I am, seated still, listening to the waves of 
“tireless blue ocean” inside me,
holding tight to the fragments of life,
until the reality dawn on me, knocks my heart and tell me 
“loneliness” was named after you”.

Date 		:	4 November 2020
Contest name	:	Ambedo Poetry Contest
Contest Sponsor:	Silent one 

Won 2nd Place at the Ambedo poetry Contest, sponsored by silent one, judged on 5 November 2020.
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Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 4:29 PM
Congratulations, Rasitha, on your win. It is a beautiful, lyrical, reflective piece. Love every word - so meaningful! Love, Mala
Ranasinghe Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 1:59 AM
Thank you, Mala, for these encouraging words. Means a lot to me.
One Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 6:17 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Ranasinghe Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 1:15 PM
Thank you Silent one for the great theme and the encouraging words. It's a pleasure to be here with great poets.
Ranaweera  Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 2:08 AM
This is an excellent, creative piece, Rasitha!! So vivid; so graceful; so reflective; so realistic!! Good Luck in Silent One's contest!!
Ranasinghe Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 8:39 PM
Thank you very much for the encouraging comment.
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