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In a Poem

~ I found you in a poem... waiting between the verses as metaphoric visions pulled me in atop the ripples, placing me before every autumn breath as I read with my eyes closed dreaming of all that I might find ~

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Date: 10/14/2019 8:27:00 PM
I loved this from the opening line...nicely done, my friend.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/15/2019 7:43:00 AM
Thank you. I can always count on you to stop by with words that are encouraging and inspiring.
Date: 10/14/2019 8:08:00 PM
Hi Chris, This poem is amazing. I was transported right into it. Thanks for writing such a poem:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 10/15/2019 7:42:00 AM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment Alexis.
Date: 10/14/2019 8:02:00 PM
This one got me. A FAVE, Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/15/2019 7:42:00 AM
Thanks Line. I am happy you enjoyed this one so much
Date: 10/14/2019 6:56:00 PM
one never knows what they may find in a poem, through the verses or in the metaphor... love this...:) hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 10/15/2019 7:41:00 AM
Thank you Sandy. You are right, one never knows. : )
Date: 10/14/2019 5:54:00 PM
This pulled me right in Chris. I liked the line, pulled me in atop the ripples :) Great one :)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/15/2019 7:41:00 AM
I am happy you felt this one Heidi. I appreciate you my friend.

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