Chris Green Poet Free verse

In a Poem

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I found you in a poem...
waiting between the verses
as metaphoric visions
pulled me in atop the ripples,
placing me before every autumn breath
as I read with my eyes closed
dreaming of all that I might find

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Hello There October 14, 2019 at 8:27 PM I loved this from the opening line...nicely done, my friend. Chris Green October 15, 2019 at 7:43 AM Thank you. I can always count on you to stop by with words that are encouraging and inspiring.

Alexis Y. October 14, 2019 at 8:08 PM Hi Chris, This poem is amazing. I was transported right into it. Thanks for writing such a poem:-) Alexis Chris Green October 15, 2019 at 7:42 AM Thank you for taking the time to read and comment Alexis.

Line Gauthier October 14, 2019 at 8:02 PM This one got me. A FAVE, Chris. Chris Green October 15, 2019 at 7:42 AM Thanks Line. I am happy you enjoyed this one so much

Sandra Adams October 14, 2019 at 6:56 PM one never knows what they may find in a poem, through the verses or in the metaphor... love this...:) hugs Chris Green October 15, 2019 at 7:41 AM Thank you Sandy. You are right, one never knows. : )

Heidi Sands October 14, 2019 at 5:54 PM This pulled me right in Chris. I liked the line, pulled me in atop the ripples :) Great one :) Chris Green October 15, 2019 at 7:41 AM I am happy you felt this one Heidi. I appreciate you my friend.