Sara Kendrick Poet Sonnet

In a Pique

In these deep woods, poetry brews rich dark
Like dark coffee, acidic on tongue_ cheek 
I could say deep dark remarks on tales embark
Write poem, for you have put me in a pique

From the deep dark forest draw ravens black
Let them feed upon your brain's carrion
For it is dead, vile, let them eat your flack
Your cadaver brain is barbarian

Refined gracious lady keeps loving
Her spirit turns blind eye to all faults
Nearly all faults_learning to be accepting
Even when bombarded with rash insults


These dark, dark woods forgive your wrong thinking
Though in heart it's impact still affecting

finis

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Mohammad Yamin July 7, 2012 at 1:34 PM It is indeed a fascinating poem when finished. I was expecting it to be this way, given your talent. A tribute to your pen. -Mohammad

Nette Onclaud July 3, 2012 at 12:56 PM bold write , sara, and one that is an outpouring of your soul... you are on fire!..:) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich July 3, 2012 at 5:35 AM Strong writing, my friend. I can truly feel your being "in a pique!"

Kasim Ishmael July 3, 2012 at 5:10 AM very nice writing ,i can see it and feel it,,thank you for the kind words inon my poem pace maker,and yes its a true poem that is happining right now in my life ,thank you have a great day

Tim B July 2, 2012 at 9:31 PM I enjoyed this immensely Mrs. Sara. I think we can relate. I digress though, one experiences things differently from another. I think the first two lines in the first stanza are my favorite, though it is all extremely well written. Thank you for sharing.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 2, 2012 at 8:23 PM a most outstanding and elegant write Sara.. beautiful and well constructed .. best wishes if for a contest luv..

Mohammad Yamin July 2, 2012 at 4:33 PM An amazing write with elegant metaphors. Morning shows the day. It will be a fascinating poem when finished. As always your heartwarming comments on my poem Heart's Desire are profound and thought provocative. I am impressed by your sensibility and vision. What you say about the quality of love is so true. Dear Sara you are great. -Mohammad

Russell Sivey July 2, 2012 at 3:52 PM This is a wondrous write even if you haven't finished it yet! What a remarkable poem full of great images for the mind to absorb! I enjoyed this a lot, the rich dark thoughts! Great Work!!

Steven Henderson July 2, 2012 at 3:33 PM Only for a moment I pray Sara. Peace and blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen July 2, 2012 at 3:14 PM As usual Sara.....you are unique !!! - love Anne-Lise