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Juxtaposed to her visage frozen in time like a work of art I examine my image as a note of currency held to the light for a watermark my smile suspiciously pleased to have been caught in the presence of cheer the look in my eyes of apprehension the moment was other than real the moment I knew it could never be like that again

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Date: 6/9/2016 2:51:00 AM
This is a lovely composition, Chuck...a monumental moment in time.... and I also like the structure. "my smile suspiciously pleased to have been caught in the presence of cheer"... love those lines, especially the use of "suspiciously pleased"...welcome back Chuck, I've missed ya! Always, Laura
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