Diane Christian Poet Rhyme

In a Perfect World

In a perfect world 
there would be no war
no disease and no pain
in a  perfect world there would be nothing that would make
us feel  like the worlds gone insane
in a perfect world we would be free
in a  perfect world  for you and me
there is no perfect world since the fall of man
a lesson we have all  learned 
but everything will be perfect when Jesus has returned
on his arrival things will be as they should be
in a perfect place with him both you and me

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Pashang Salehi February 28, 2017 at 1:00 PM My dear Diane, in a perfect world, I'll be 6 foot 2, with 30 pounds less weight and 30 less years..... In a perfect world there will be no pain, no medication and only MORE LOVE....

Dorian Petersen Potter February 18, 2016 at 11:46 AM Beautiful pen Diane! Yes, in a perfect world that waits in the wings till Jesus returns.Beautifully painted piece:))A 7!Thank you so much for your very kind visit and comments on my poem.Very deeply appreciated.Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light God bless you!:) D Diane Christian February 19, 2016 at 11:06 AM thank you

Gordon Mcconnell February 18, 2016 at 11:22 AM nice one Diane, enjoyed it! Diane Christian February 19, 2016 at 11:06 AM thank you

Sarita Milliner February 16, 2016 at 2:52 PM Very nice!!! Diane Christian February 16, 2016 at 3:13 PM thank you

Nette Onclaud February 16, 2016 at 1:02 PM absolutely what our Lord wants earth to be.. really divine, diane.. huggs Diane Christian February 16, 2016 at 1:38 PM thank you nette