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In a Perfect World

In my perfect world, Everybody would have a perfect world, A perfect space of their own, All having a special part of earth, All having the perfect house, Living without money! No need, Within a perfect garden, Growing every type of fruit Every kind of vegetable known to man, Grains seeds nuts for health and healing, Having the warmth of the sun every day, Rain only when needed, to water the food, No floods earthquakes or disasters, No water, gas, or electric bills, All having the knowledge to grow, To live to survive independently. Keeping our own space alive and well, No sickness no pain, without laws or wars Family staying together within their own communities, Building and keeping each other safe, No orphans, no poverty, Only the richness of a never ending supply of food. Sharing and swapping with others if needed, No selling for profit, or gain, No greed, or higher rank, No politics, or need to police, Crime does not exist, In this perfect world of mine, 14/02/2016 (For contest Catie Lindsey)

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Date: 3/5/2016 11:11:00 AM
Wonderful! Wonderful! So so so wonderful....
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 3/5/2016 1:45:00 PM
Thank you Funom xxx
Date: 2/20/2016 9:15:00 PM
Your world Wendy would be a wonderful place. Thanks for sharing. An excellent write.
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 2/21/2016 12:16:00 PM
Thank you Michael x
Date: 2/20/2016 4:48:00 AM
A perfect world we live in only humans are so blinded with vices of greed among a few they destroy the sanctuary of its beauty excellent piece Wendy wishing you a blessed weekend
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 2/20/2016 9:28:00 AM
Thank you Liam good to meet you x thank you for reading my poems x
Date: 2/17/2016 1:05:00 PM
That would be a perfect world, Wendy. Elaine
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 2/18/2016 1:39:00 PM
Thank you Elaine, nice to meet you xxxxx
Date: 2/16/2016 5:04:00 PM
I so agree with all the things in your perfect world, they would be my idea of a perfect world too. Beautiful! #7
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 2/17/2016 3:44:00 AM
Me too wish it was my garden xxxxx
Date: 2/15/2016 5:31:00 PM
Ah Wendy, your words describe the garden of Eden, a Paradise on Earth. Well written. Emile.
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 2/16/2016 7:47:00 AM
Thank you I would love my own garden it's my dream, and I'm sad because I don't have it x
Date: 2/15/2016 1:05:00 PM
That would be great Wendy...Nicely penned
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 2/16/2016 7:48:00 AM
Wish it was mine x sad xx would love this garden x
Date: 2/14/2016 7:59:00 PM
wouldn't it be so nice? This perfect world is called the Millenium. (can't even spell it right) Anyway, for it to happen, we have to be rid of the bad guys!! There are just too many of them right now!
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 2/16/2016 7:50:00 AM
Wish it was mine sad x would love it xxxxx

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