In a Perfect World

In my perfect world,
Everybody would have a perfect world,
A perfect space of their own,
All having a special part of earth,
All having the perfect house,
Living without money! No need,
Within a perfect garden,
Growing every type of fruit 
Every kind of vegetable known to man,
Grains seeds nuts for health and healing,
Having the warmth of the sun every day,  
Rain only when needed, to water the food,
No floods earthquakes or disasters,
No water, gas, or electric bills,
All having the knowledge to grow,
To live to survive independently.
Keeping our own space alive and well,
No sickness no pain, without laws or wars
Family staying together within their own communities,
Building and keeping each other safe,
No orphans, no poverty, 
Only the richness of a never ending supply of food.
Sharing and swapping with others if needed,
No selling for profit, or gain,
No greed, or higher rank,
No politics, or need to police, 
Crime does not exist, 
In this perfect world of mine,

14/02/2016
(For contest Catie Lindsey)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Makama Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 11:11 AM
Wonderful! Wonderful! So so so wonderful....
Rycroft Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 1:45 PM
Thank you Funom xxx
Tor Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 9:15 PM
Your world Wendy would be a wonderful place. Thanks for sharing. An excellent write.
Rycroft Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 12:16 PM
Thank you Michael x
Mcdaid Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 4:48 AM
A perfect world we live in only humans are so blinded with vices of greed among a few they destroy the sanctuary of its beauty excellent piece Wendy wishing you a blessed weekend
Rycroft Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 9:28 AM
Thank you Liam good to meet you x thank you for reading my poems x
George   Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 1:05 PM
That would be a perfect world, Wendy. Elaine
Rycroft Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 1:39 PM
Thank you Elaine, nice to meet you xxxxx
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 5:04 PM
I so agree with all the things in your perfect world, they would be my idea of a perfect world too. Beautiful! #7
Rycroft Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 3:44 AM
Me too wish it was my garden xxxxx
Pinet Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 5:31 PM
Ah Wendy, your words describe the garden of Eden, a Paradise on Earth. Well written. Emile.
Rycroft Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 7:47 AM
Thank you I would love my own garden it's my dream, and I'm sad because I don't have it x
May Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 1:05 PM
That would be great Wendy...Nicely penned
Rycroft Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 7:48 AM
Wish it was mine x sad xx would love this garden x
Dietrich Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 7:59 PM
wouldn't it be so nice? This perfect world is called the Millenium. (can't even spell it right) Anyway, for it to happen, we have to be rid of the bad guys!! There are just too many of them right now!
Rycroft Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 7:50 AM
Wish it was mine sad x would love it xxxxx
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