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In a Perfect World

Where does the mind draw the line on how much pain it will accept, How do you know how close you are; will you be over it in just one more step? As your mind continues intact; and you are sure you can take no more, Somehow it keeps on going; though you know you are losing the war. Maybe you've already crossed the line, you are just so far gone you don't even know; The world seems so mixed up to you, so full of tragedy and woe. Sometimes I think it would be easier, to cross the line and let your mind be free; Be in your own special place, make the world anything you want it to be. In your own perfect world; all people would be good and kind, always willing to help others, Who find themselves in a bind. There would be no more starvation in the world; no more wars would ever be fought, Children would play with toys instead of guns, Love, respect and values would again matter a lot. What a sad world we live in, Where everyone struggles until the day they die; Trying to acquire as many possessions as they can, as if in the end that is what they will be judged by.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/6/2011 11:12:00 AM
A thought-provoking poem. Will a perfect world ever exist? Not if mankind is left to his own devices. All that decent people can do is treat other people with respect and try to make the world a slightly better place. Regards, Robert.
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