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In a Perfect World

In a perfect world There are no wars We are all brothers and sisters Moms and Dads revering and loving Believing in the goodness of offspring and neighbors We support each other Understanding that we are all the same Each a piece of the human race that needs to be For the puzzle is not complete without each one of us Soul sisters, soul brothers, souls united in hope and peace and love.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 12/10/2019 11:34:00 PM

A lovely poem with a Christmasy theme! :)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/10/2019 11:47:00 PM

Thank you Evelyn.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/10/2019 3:22:00 PM

Ooh well penned piece. Enjoyed.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/10/2019 11:47:00 PM

Thanks. I may have to reread it.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/10/2019 2:53:00 PM

And our 401k's are booming, our houses are appreciating like mad, our children all get into Harvard, we are all CEO's making zillions of dollars... Ha, ha ~ Ralph the Republican AND Debbie the Democrat (No difference between the two). :) gw

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/10/2019 11:47:00 PM

Hilarious. Glad I am an Independent. Smile. Smirk.

Jenish Somadas

Date: 12/10/2019 9:38:00 AM

Souls united...Beautiful message..

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/10/2019 12:11:00 PM

Thank you Jenish.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/10/2019 4:15:00 AM

A universal message of love and peace that humanity has to listen to if wishes to survive. Wonderfully done dear, Caren.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/10/2019 7:05:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios.