In a Kaleidoscope

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I’m in a kaleidoscope at the park colors… whirling… leaves… twirling An outpouring of glitter sprinkles and sparkles a wind whipping through everglades O, for the afternoon to never grow dark!

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David Fisher

Date: 12/5/2024 4:55:00 PM

That's a good way to look at things; every day in that Kaleidoscope one way or another. Mine was with snow white, but not with that girl in the story.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/5/2024 8:05:00 PM

David, Snow White must have been mighty disappointed!! (Stuck with all those dwarves too!).

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/5/2024 11:42:00 AM

What a fun kaleidoscope write. I had one as a kid/loved playing with it. Have a fun day writing away..................

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/5/2024 8:07:00 PM

You 'had' a kaleidoscope... Yo mean you didn't keep it?! ~ Pez Dispenser

Michael Tor

Date: 12/4/2024 11:30:00 PM

They are real neat to look through. I remember when they came out everyone was raving about them. I am thinking maybe the 60's looked it up 1816 by a man named Brewster. Thanks for sharing have a great day my friend...

Michael Tor
Date: 12/6/2024 1:02:00 AM

lol

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/5/2024 8:14:00 PM

KALEIDOSCOPE: Old Man Brewster // had him a rooster // Gave him a scope // Rooster couldn't cope // Collided with a moose, sir.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/5/2024 8:13:00 PM

KALEIDOSCOPE: Old Man Brewster // had him a rooster // Gave him a scope // Rooster couldn't cope // Collided with a moose, sir.