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In a Kaleidoscope

I’m in a kaleidoscope at the park
       colors… whirling… leaves… twirling

   An outpouring of glitter sprinkles and sparkles
       a wind whipping through everglades

      O, for the afternoon to never grow dark!
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Fisher Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 4:55 PM
That's a good way to look at things; every day in that Kaleidoscope one way or another. Mine was with snow white, but not with that girl in the story.
Wolf Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 8:05 PM
David, Snow White must have been mighty disappointed!! (Stuck with all those dwarves too!).
Goldsmith Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 11:42 AM
What a fun kaleidoscope write. I had one as a kid/loved playing with it. Have a fun day writing away..................
Wolf Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 8:07 PM
You 'had' a kaleidoscope... Yo mean you didn't keep it?! ~ Pez Dispenser
Tor Avatar
December 4, 2024 at 11:30 PM
They are real neat to look through. I remember when they came out everyone was raving about them. I am thinking maybe the 60's looked it up 1816 by a man named Brewster. Thanks for sharing have a great day my friend...
Tor Avatar
December 6, 2024 at 1:02 AM
lol
Wolf Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 8:14 PM
KALEIDOSCOPE: Old Man Brewster // had him a rooster // Gave him a scope // Rooster couldn't cope // Collided with a moose, sir.
Wolf Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 8:13 PM
KALEIDOSCOPE: Old Man Brewster // had him a rooster // Gave him a scope // Rooster couldn't cope // Collided with a moose, sir.
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