In a Hotel Room

Why did they go? They always go,
Whether they saw me I simply don’t know,
They’re here for a night and then go away,
And leave me behind, all alone I must stay,
And wait for the loved ones to whom I belong,
But I’ve been waiting now for ever so long,
I’m starting to think that they’ll never return,
But I remember those faces so full of concern,
On the day that I fell into the old hotel pool,
I never did master swimming at school,
But somehow I pulled myself out from the deep,
And came back to this room where my parents did sleep,
My Mother’s blue eyes had turned red with her tears,
Just as any mother’s whose child disappears,
I don’t understand why they just didn’t see,
That I was standing there just where I should be,
Then they were gone, leaving me here in this room,
Sometimes full of life, sometimes cold as the tomb,
Why did they go? They always go.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 20, 2013 at 2:01 AM
Many Congratulations on your win Sharon, sorry i am a bit late xx
Andresen Avatar
February 20, 2013 at 1:37 AM
Good job! - Your hotel is 7 star! - Congratulations! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 8:42 PM
wow, very imaginative!!! I enjoyed this one a lot. GREAT story, and big congrats for your win.
Johnson Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 5:17 PM
Such a sad tale of a hotel room child. Congratulations on your win. Love, joyce
A   Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 4:17 PM
Sharon, CONGRATULATIONS :-) ~ love your awesome winning poem in Susan's contest.. take care.. PD
Guazon Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 11:38 AM
Wow! Your poem is wonderful! Goodluck with the contest!
Horsman Avatar
February 12, 2013 at 7:56 AM
this is amazing Sharon, so sad so deep, so moving, and what a wonderful poet you are, the imagery is perfect....
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