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In a Freeze

frozen twigs roll on chilled aisle
barren trees now elderly,
exposing a season's lash---
indignant Jack Frost


Winter Dodoitsu
Heather Ober's Contest
10 November 2015

Copyright © Banjo Casto | Year Posted 2015

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November 19, 2015 at 5:36 PM

Winters come and winters go but this work will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

November 16, 2015 at 11:23 AM

wow, congrats, banjo.. you did well!..huggs

November 14, 2015 at 7:48 AM

Banjo, Congratulations on your "Winter Dodoitsu Win." Luv SKAT

November 13, 2015 at 8:32 PM

Well written dodoitsu, Banjo! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

November 13, 2015 at 2:46 PM

lovely imagery Banjo congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

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