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In a Dark Dark Room

The moon is full and white, and chill, this night, 
it cascades past my open window sill, 
and all the color fades to dark from light,
a monochrome of gray which can't be stilled.

The armoire's oblong shadow strays across the floor.
I watch it from within my canopy bed. 
A nightmare gallops through an open door,
a Pooka black as coal with eyes that bled.

Its jaw agape and gore froths from his maw,
as it slowly paws the cover from my bed,
a scream freezes in my throat, a bird-like caw,
he dips down for me to mount, and I am led.

Upon this demon spawn, I scour the moor
'til dawn descends to belay this foul glamour.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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July 7, 2012 at 11:09 PM
debbie, congratulations in Brian Strand's 186th contest. Take care, it's been fun reading many winners tonight* PD
Brown Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 1:16 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "#186" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Nair Avatar
July 1, 2012 at 6:37 PM
Congrats on the win! Jag
Onclaud Avatar
July 1, 2012 at 1:18 PM
evoking unsettling images and thoughts so well scribed, debbie... i shiver ( with delight)!.. congrats!..:) huggs!
Sweetheart Avatar
July 1, 2012 at 10:39 AM
congrats Debbie on another wonderful write and win for Brian.. always an elegant treat to read your treasures luv.. hope all is well.. we are steaming on 100 degree beach but I so luv it. .. much needed r and r..luv..
Ahmad Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 11:30 PM
This one is Nice!
Kendrick Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 2:12 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative and descriptive sonnet..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
April 9, 2012 at 10:59 PM
A FAVE now that I know it's yours for sure.
Dietrich Avatar
April 8, 2012 at 6:52 PM
Debs, I am thinking WOW what a sonnet and then I see "by Leslie Ward" But also that name is beneath the picture. Is Leslie author of the poem? And is Abella the painter's artist? Gosh< i was getting ready to say, OMG, you have become quite the sonneteer. Maybe it IS your poem? It's outstanding.
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April 6, 2012 at 1:48 PM
Beautiful, but scary images come with this poem.
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