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In a bottle

to dream drift away in a bottle to journey where I want to play so empty to be In a bottle then I see you in there with me

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Date: 9/20/2014 12:44:00 PM
wonderful rhyming haikus that take the reader on a lovely journey:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 9/21/2014 3:32:00 AM
awe thanks what a nice compliment
Date: 9/20/2014 8:08:00 AM
Nice rhyming in haiku, Cynthia
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 9/21/2014 3:32:00 AM
thank you dr Ram
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 9/20/2014 8:09:00 AM
thank you Maurice, it was a gift given me I like to return and grow
Date: 9/20/2014 7:09:00 AM
A great read. Very strong delivery, a great write.
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 9/21/2014 3:34:00 AM
thank you Maurice, sorry my last reply ended up in wrong box
Date: 9/20/2014 6:49:00 AM
Very rich haiku. Use of "bottle" has heightened the intensity of the poems as it symbolizes life--contents in and out on its way to the unknown. Hugs!
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 9/20/2014 8:08:00 AM
this is my challenge
Date: 9/20/2014 5:57:00 AM
What a lovely place to be when you are with the one you wish to be! Beautifully expressed, dear Cynthia!
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 9/20/2014 6:05:00 AM
thank you, how fun it is to make a small empty space filled with imagination,