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In a Bottle

darken red wine drink
an epistle - enclosed
     for there’s not reason
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PENNED ON JULY 24, 2014!

betrayalconflictconfusiondarkdrinkhaiku

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Poet Destroyer A

September 3, 2014 at 11:23 AM

That reminds me, I have a few more to let go of.. LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

September 2, 2014 at 10:23 AM

glad you enjoyed the contest

Verlena S. Walker

September 2, 2014 at 5:51 PM

I truly did PD. You really are gem when it comes to your contests. LVerlena

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 21, 2014 at 5:39 AM

Quite interesting and creative write, congrats

Verlena S. Walker

August 21, 2014 at 9:47 AM

Thanks Dr. Ram... Verlena

Poet Destroyer A

August 20, 2014 at 9:47 AM

Verlena, Congratulations!!! Thank you for the awesome Bottled Up senryu. Stop by my latest blog, "You Sunk My "BATTLESHIP" :)" if you like. I enjoyed closing this contest. Always ~LINDA~

Verlena S. Walker

August 20, 2014 at 4:33 PM

Thanks PD for your support in this contest... Verlena

Andrea Dietrich

July 27, 2014 at 5:16 PM

another mysterious one. Nice to see it!

Verlena S. Walker

July 27, 2014 at 5:34 PM

Thanks Andrea... Verlena

Poet Destroyer A

July 25, 2014 at 7:47 PM

Thank you for the entry... PD

Verlena S. Walker

July 25, 2014 at 10:02 PM

Always... Verlena

Jslambert Mister Roboto

July 25, 2014 at 12:32 PM

how I do love a haiku. this one is wise like the old owl....Hu ---hu.......I found an epistle in an empty wine bottle in Myrtle beach one night at high tide. The letter was written that same day....So some schmuck probably just gentle let go of it at the shore line. The letter was interesting to say the least. It was written from a guy to a guy and had some erotic lines which got me all hot and bothered, and I'm not even gay...or am I.....*~wink wink, Dr. Evil style, "One Million Dollars"

Verlena S. Walker

July 25, 2014 at 1:32 PM

Thanks JS for your invigorating remarks... Verlena :0))s.

Sara Kendrick

July 25, 2014 at 5:32 AM

Interesting work..I am now perplexed for not sure what is meant..An epistle is a letter so not sure if the bottle had been emptied then enclosed or if a few sips took the person's reason and they put the epistle in with the wine?...A great work leaves one wondering what the author meant..Thanks for the honor placing in your contest..I enjoyed writing that one..Sara

Verlena S. Walker

July 25, 2014 at 1:34 PM

Hi Sara, might the letter be enclosed with the win or maybe the letter was within; however, it is written in mystery. Hugs Verlena :0))s.