in a boat

in the deepest sea your eyes still swallowed me

through the wildest tempests i could still hear your voice

and as the sun emerged from tattered skies, you were still more brilliant
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Agustin Avatar
April 19, 2026 at 12:31 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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April 16, 2026 at 9:02 PM
please comment. lowk a rookie so im looking for tips
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