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In a Barroom

She presses into the noise like a tabacco leaf pressing into the shape of a coffin nail. The smoky haze that fills this darkened place does little to camouflage the weariness of life. Old-time music beats a familiar rhythm, and once again she dances with strangers who fail to give her silence.

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Date: 8/24/2021 3:54:00 AM
Oh Chetta, you should be writing a book, your phrases wrap around me like nobody's business, Much love, :)
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Chetta Achara
Date: 8/24/2021 3:02:00 PM
Thank you. You are too kind...

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