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In 2118

In the Great War’s aftermath a handful survived,
though seven billion had perished.
Time to excavate a country’s history arrived
and much speculation had been nourished.
Survivors sought signs of the culture that had flourished.

Word-of-mouth history never explained
how the world’s once-great civilization fell,
or why such a small number remained.
Unearthing the White House proceeded well,
yet beneath it excavators found a mysterious cell.

This large, steel chamber was marked by the word “Banished,”
and as inquisitive searchers opened the vault,
curiosity promptly vanished.
Musty relics they examined without halt,
finally realizing what had been at fault.

Every document inscribed with “in God we trust”
and all references to a Creator
lay buried beneath dust.
Men lacking faith had believed there was no One greater;
hubris had been their annihilator.




English Quintain
May 19, 2018
Contest: ”In 100 Years”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 10:11 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Carolyn.
Allison Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 6:01 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Carolyn:-) hugs Jan xx
Lamoureux Avatar
May 30, 2018 at 5:52 PM
Scary but truth is imbedded in in your lines. You are a good story teller. I too hope New Jerusalem is firmly established before then.
One Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 9:49 AM
so much of what you say could be evident, however I feel, religion will slowly die out as the masses are dumbed down by media and other sources brainwashing them... Great poetry Carolyn..
Devonshire Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 7:49 PM
We are in for a lot of trouble if we lose our spiritual values. It's a topic to which I have given a lot of thought. Very scary scenarios.
Warrior Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 6:08 AM
Superbly executed my friend...a great read Carolyn...love and light...^WW^
Dietrich Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 5:33 PM
I don't remember if I emailed you today but hotmail was giving me problems. Anyway, HELLO!! Hope you have an awesome day. I need to get going on dinner now. I am caught up here and just want to write a few poems!
Dietrich Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 5:32 PM
wow, what a powerful message, Carolyn. Outstanding work!
Sergi Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 3:16 PM
A poignant but powerful poem, Carolyn! Not unlike Rome.
Devonshire Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 3:03 PM
There is evidence of numerous civilizations that vanished for unknown reasons, Ralph. Natural disasters account for some, but in others there were conscious choices that led to demise. Thanks for pointing out that Rome is among them.
Sergi Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 3:15 PM
A poignant but powerful poem, Carolyn! Not unlike Rome.
Callus Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 1:21 PM
An excellent Quintain with an equally good topic, Carolyn. A case of becoming too big for our own shoes! Pride and overconfidence can easily lead to our downfall. Love & Hugs // paul
Devonshire Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 3:08 PM
Indeed, it happens, Paul. If we acknowledge the signs in time, perhaps the worst-case scenarios can be avoided. Thank you, Carolyn
Parker Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 12:21 PM
a question implied a question answered, could it be that mankind is really a creature whose greatest weapon is his greatest evil...his brain...good luck in the contest
Gondolf Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 11:54 AM
Nicely written, Carolyn, I often wonder what the future will be like and this is certainly not a far fetched possibility. Good luck in the contest. John
Allison Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 7:57 AM
Such a scary scenario, I'm so glad I won't be around to see this happen Carolyn:-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 11:19 PM
Powerful verse Carolyn, mankind has certainly gone above his station. Warnings unheeded but there will be a big price to pay. Tom.
Devonshire Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 3:25 PM
We can only hope that future generations learn from our mistakes. Thank you, Tom
La France Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 10:28 PM
Carolyn, this is a great write, thought provoking, best of luck in the contest~
Devonshire Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 3:33 PM
Thank you! Just read your monorhyme and it touched my heart. We seem to have quite a few things in common.
May Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 9:22 PM
An apocalyptic warning that will remain unheeded...Powerful write Carolyn...Best wishes
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