In 100 Years

In one-hundred years, might things be as bad
as people guess? I’d like to think at last
that peace prevails. Instead of being sad -
that people share! All fear is in the past!

Perhaps we’ll be invaded by a race
of aliens who teach us how to love -
and how all poverty we can erase.
Far more advanced, they will have plenty of
good things beyond our own technology
to help us meet our needs and cure disease.
Who knows?  Perhaps my great-grandchildren see
a “brave new world,” where all live life with ease.
And if I’m lucky, I will not be dead
if miracles invade our world instead!

June 4, 2018 for Brian Davey's In 100 Years Poetry Contest
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Laurie Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 12:36 AM
Hello Andrea … I wonder how many generations before us had this same vision, however if we don't remain positive then it can never occur - thanks Andrea - Lindsay
Gauthier Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 6:53 PM
A fun poem, Andrea.
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June 6, 2018 at 11:27 AM
Wonderful reflection/projection of where the world could be in 100 years! For mankind to make any real progress, we have to maintain a positive, hopeful outlook for the future and influence others on a global scale to buy-into it. Great sonnet, my friend - beautifully written! Best regards and hugs. Pandita
Canerdy Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 6:17 PM
Excellent, creative, Andrea! Janice
Devonshire Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 2:27 PM
At some point, I do believe peace will come, Andrea. Perhaps, as you say, a more evolved race will intercede and turn us away from the violence we see today. (I do believe that's possible, and there is much evidence aliens have made their mark on our past as well.) By the 21st century, gerontologists expect life spans to be as high as 140 years. What a wonderful sonnet, my friend. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn
Wolf Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 10:51 AM
Nice to read something 'sun-shiney' for a change. Hope everything you wrote is realized, Andrea! ~ Gershon
Cunningham Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 3:08 AM
A lovely sonnet Andrea, one that is hopeful for the future of mankind. Good luck. Tom.
Ashley Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 10:54 PM
Lovely optimism shines in your beautiful sonnet Andrea. I love your couplet, your last line is an awesome closer, miracles invading our world - such a lovely thought! Could happen... Best wishes for a win!
Cozart Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 3:54 PM
This is so optimistic, just like me!! I always want to find the silver lining. Good luck in the contest!
Turner Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 12:14 PM
Never hurts to think positive Andrea. I only wish I felt the same. Good luck, sweetie.
Dietrich Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 5:41 PM
yeah, the way things are going, we can only live in hope.
Parker Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 9:34 AM
if the next hundred are like the last hundred...good luck in the contest
Krutsinger Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 9:32 AM
A beautiful piece of poetry! Good luck in the contest, Andrea. Very optimistic!
Warrior Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 9:27 AM
What a sonnet will look like in a hundred years...lovely said my friend...love and light...^WW^
Allison Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 9:14 AM
Who knows what the world will be like but I'll go with your world in 100 years rather than my tongue in cheek thoughts lol:-) Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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