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In-Lightenment

Your Enlightenment 
Please don’t be
frightened of it
Makes all knowledge
lit

Don’t ever forget
Always forgive and
let live
And be creative

Forevermore love
To be your own
peaceful dove
Sun you want above

Please commit to it
I found my
enlightenment 
Tell me where is
yours?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/4/2014 6:57:00 AM
Congrats, dear!
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Date: 9/2/2014 9:07:00 PM
Oustanding collection BMR! Congrats, I too esp. liked the last...
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Date: 9/2/2014 7:11:00 PM
Awesome, I love the last one the best, posing the question, where as everyone finds enlightenment differently, yours is one of healing and loving, forgiving and peace. Well done and perfectly placed win ;)
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Date: 9/2/2014 3:06:00 PM
congratulations on an excellent win for these excellent haiku Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/2/2014 12:20:00 PM
- Really beautiful, B.Maxine - Congratulations on your 3rd place in the contest :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/2/2014 9:41:00 AM
Excellent piece - I love this great haiku! Congratulations on your win! Pandita
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Date: 9/2/2014 6:55:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win B max! Superb haikus!
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Date: 9/2/2014 4:50:00 AM
Visiting again to congratulate you on a great win, Maxine
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Date: 9/2/2014 12:44:00 AM
Well done Maxine. Congratulations on your win! Verlena
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Date: 9/1/2014 10:38:00 PM
Congratulations to you - I enjoyed your words. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 9/1/2014 8:59:00 PM
Congratulations on a well done and meaningful Haiku.
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Date: 8/19/2014 11:15:00 PM
Stackin up Haiku like Hi-choo. Sneezes Bless You! ~JSL Always a pleasure reading yir stuff!
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Date: 8/12/2014 7:57:00 AM
Nice images for power and prayer,
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