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IMPULSES


prosaic
   reality
     lengthening
fading

the sensory
    alluring 
musing
  bewildering 
in
lucidity
adopts
  a
    radiated
aura

a paradox 
  close
 &intimate
yet
   inexpressible
profound
 shadowy
    &persuasive 
sublime
      inert
   passive
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Anaya Avatar
January 15, 2026 at 8:19 AM
An impressive string of adverbs & adjectives, you've strung. You've captured the desire to act, it's force, & momentum. Faving
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