Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Tanka

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11.12.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Sanford-style tanka - 
- A PICTURE PROMPT -
 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Suzette Richards

2nd place in the contest

- Impulse Rain -

                                     
                                               impulse rain
                                            magical thinking
                                             a perspective
                                           fragile and porous
                                         fundamental elements

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Paul Callus January 8, 2025 at 3:03 PM An unexpected rainfall can provide a pleasant surprise, Anne-Lise. Such is your winning "impulsive rain"!! Congratulations & Hugs // paul

Jim Healey January 8, 2025 at 7:39 AM Well done, Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your winning placement. Cheers from Canada. Jim

Duke Beaufort December 17, 2024 at 7:45 AM Anne-Lise, you make a magical connection between a brief shower and how we might think of our world around us. Moments like ideas can be fleeting and almost escape your consciousness. Your poetry exists on a deep level! Smiles and thanks!!!

Malabika Ray Choudhury December 15, 2024 at 11:48 AM Beautiful, Dear Anne-Lise! Enjoyed your take on the picture!

Jennifer Proxenos December 13, 2024 at 5:21 AM Hi Anne-Lise, your write my dear friend creative and enjoyable as always. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.. Anne-Lise Andresen December 13, 2024 at 6:15 AM - Thank you very much, Jenny :) - hugs

Ink Empress December 13, 2024 at 1:50 AM This is beautiful how your words flow so well in this dear anne lise, so well written and expressed for the picture prompt, best wishes, sending you light always Anne-Lise Andresen December 13, 2024 at 6:15 AM - Thank you very much, Ink :) - hugs

Deb M December 12, 2024 at 3:13 AM I just adore rain and this delightful poem Sunshine! Debx Anne-Lise Andresen December 12, 2024 at 7:24 AM - Thank you very much, Deb :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich December 11, 2024 at 12:55 PM I am not sure how to do the challenge, but I bet you got it! Indeed, as Jay says, your poem fits the essence of the picture. Anne-Lise Andresen December 12, 2024 at 7:23 AM -... actually I haven't, Andrea :) - hugs

John Read December 11, 2024 at 10:43 AM Your poem fits the picture perfectly Anne sure to do well in the contest. xx Anne-Lise Andresen December 11, 2024 at 11:16 AM - Thank you very much, John :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham December 11, 2024 at 10:24 AM Much as we dislike it we could not survive without it. Good luck in the contest Anne-Lise. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen December 11, 2024 at 10:29 AM - I need your good luck for this contest, Tom... never heard of: Sanford-style tanka... thanks :) - hugs

Jay Narain December 11, 2024 at 10:14 AM Nice Tanka. Fits the essence of the picture. Anne-Lise Andresen December 11, 2024 at 10:18 AM - I prefer the "regular tanka -5-7-5-7-7-" ... thanks, Jay :) - hugs