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the snow people saw the sun for the first time the pipe dropped from her mouth the carrot dropped from him their feelings weren't tears they were deeply felt not knowing what had moved them so was to melt

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Date: 4/16/2019 11:57:00 AM
Snowman are like love, once the season is gone, it's gone but will rise again. Stay frosty my friend.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 4/16/2019 12:01:00 PM
Thanks David. Actually I want to be warm!!! And the 2 snow people poems today are politically correct jajaja
Date: 4/16/2019 11:28:00 AM
i LOVE this, a fave :)))
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 4/17/2019 7:25:00 AM
No one, except you of course, seems to get the pipe and carrot reference. I freely thought of it while bringing back childhood childish memories jajaja.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 4/17/2019 7:09:00 AM
It is lovely at last.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 4/16/2019 11:34:00 AM
Thanks Maureen. I don't know why I'm thinking snow. I want to garden. How's the weather way up north?