Imprint of dream destination

Warm sun tickles turquoise ripples.
With rhythm they lap lazy golden beaches.
The perfume of gardenia pervades.



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 2nd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kiser Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 9:59 PM
Turquoise is my favorite color and stone; I do love those "turquoise ripples."
Gauthier Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 12:12 AM
Turquoise is absolutely magical for sure. Thanks for your lovely visit, ML.
Adams Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 4:33 PM
Makes me feel a little better about all this rain!! Well done, Line!!.....80)
Gauthier Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 4:37 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit, Pat.
Marc Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 10:40 AM
Lovely :)
Gauthier Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 4:38 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, PM.
Cunningham Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 12:21 AM
What a beautiful perfect image line. Good luck. Tom.
Gauthier Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 6:22 AM
Thanks, Tom. That's where I'd like to be right now... with my sweetheart, toes in the hot sand.
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