Impressive Lover

I make haste to run to you
After twenty years, I know it's true
Love so fierce, it makes me sweat
Daydreaming of you only makes me wet
Dimples so deep, they are still alarming
One gold tooth, so bright, it' charming


Adrienne L. Gresham
1-6 lines of Romance and Love
written 04/12/2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
April 17, 2012 at 7:21 PM
This one is kind of funny. congratulations
Fisher Avatar
April 17, 2012 at 1:18 PM
Many congrats on your feature this week Rgds Janette
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April 17, 2012 at 5:31 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Adrienne. Love, Carol
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April 16, 2012 at 1:33 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Russell's "1-6 Lines of Romance and Love" contest Adrienne. Love, Carol
Taylor Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 5:54 PM
Congrats on your win, Adrienne. Amazing. Great job. Hugs, Ralph
Neels Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 2:11 PM
Adrienne, congratulations on your win in the contest ;)
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April 15, 2012 at 8:22 AM
congrats Adrienne on an impressive win for an expressive write luv..
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April 14, 2012 at 10:01 PM
Adrienne, ooo... fierce love.... and wow.... this is pass charming.... hot passion... good luck in the contest...pd
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April 13, 2012 at 11:10 AM
Sweet, romantic and lovely ...all in one Adrienne !!! Wish you luck in contest! Have a lovely weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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