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Wallet Fine Art - Monet's Woman with a Parasol – Jules Enchanting Gifts

Impressions of Mother and I

My mother’s the wind in the fields of gold. Cloud cover, her verdant parasol, optimistically high. A capped child am I, and a small wittled sigh, Before either one of us become very old. Tall weeds are my pants, cerulean sky my shirt. My mother’s long skirt with cyclone folds. Like time passing, her cloud-countenance unscrolled. We share a faraway look as the impish day flirts. Does God capture such natural poses as ours? Do angel fingers flutter through our family album? Do these familiar winged creatures fancy the plum of our faces, sunkissed or coldnipped by the stars? 7/16/2020
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Krutsinger Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 2:58 AM
"Does God capture such natural poses as ours?" I do believe He has now, Kim. Through your pen.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 4:57 AM
Love you, my friend! xx
Wolf Avatar
July 16, 2020 at 10:13 PM
Delicious, delightful! Stops me in my tracks. Superb poesy, my friend! Kudos, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 4:57 AM
Thanks so much! :)
Salehi Avatar
July 16, 2020 at 5:20 PM
Excellent. Well penned...
Rodrigues Avatar
July 16, 2020 at 5:24 PM
Thanks, Pashang!
Watt Avatar
July 16, 2020 at 10:48 AM
I love the Monet, and how you have brought it to life with musings of the wind and all the other elements of the painting. Enjoyed how you cleverly personified the wind and clouds, weeds and sky. 'The impish day flirts'. Big smile. ~ John
Rodrigues Avatar
July 16, 2020 at 11:39 AM
Thank you, John! :) Big smile here!
Proxenos Avatar
July 16, 2020 at 10:09 AM
Filled with beautiful memories and imagination dear Kim - you sound as if your mum and you had a very close bond - a serene, loving poem, well penned my friend. Blessings, Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 16, 2020 at 10:13 AM
Hello Jennifer. This is not about me but rather a painting. Thank you. :)
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