Impressions

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THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FREED VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respondents thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretation

IMPRESSIONS singular radical &contemporary startling subtle &intense pensive solitary inner existence pictured slightly askance a radiance blossoms &appears outstretched between an extraordinary atmosphere &the presence of something perfect elusiveness trembles radiating a wonderful overlay recognisable over time absorbing the indeterminate

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Di11y Da11y

Date: 7/29/2023 2:58:00 AM

I don't always opt in on poetry that has this appearance on the page as I don't expect to enjoy it - however I did enjoy the explanation and your choice of words and how they flowed and liked the idea of the poet and reader producing the overall result of something unique on each reading :)