Impressionistic Eve

Strong blocks of color
display the brazened buildings
by the peaceful canal,
where yellow brushstrokes 
illustrate their tranquil reflections.

Dark flecks of paint grace the bridge,
depicting blurred images of people
on a quiet romantic eve.

While the centered spire kisses
the ardent Amsterdam sky. 
As a glorious Holland day, 
comes to a beautiful close.

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Inspired by Claude Monet’s 
Zuiderkerk at Amsterdam (1872)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 4:05 PM
Wow what words woven where wit was working!! wonderfully written! Where were you??
Sweetheart Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 3:46 PM
So nice to have your classic touch back Raul and with a super poem to entertain us all... we just finished a contest requiring this form too.. but its a winner to me.. happy weekend with luv..
Hill Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 10:26 AM
lovely write, conveyed very well...TAH
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