Daver Austin Poet Free verse

Impression Carnval

IMPRESSION CARNIVAL  

My sensual implosion
A rainbow mexicality
With blue New Orleans
            and
Hats
          Masks	
                 People
                           Noise
All bursting on a sucked-up image
            and
There is tin can music
                        blatting  cacophonous
Between, strokes 
            but
There is fun      Insanity!
Movement of go-to-hell frolic

This sits on leaden plain

I sigh

Dave Austin

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Joe Maverick February 28, 2017 at 4:11 PM I can sense the owerwhelmingness within that 'I believe' you are engaging me with here Daver, I think the last lines give it so much extra dimension also, very well done.'

Daniel Turner February 28, 2017 at 7:39 AM Laissez les bons temps rouler. Fun read, Daver:) Daver Austin February 28, 2017 at 9:06 AM In old age I just mostly sit around, so the reason for inner workings. thanks for the visit. daver

Andrea Dietrich February 27, 2017 at 5:12 PM HOW COOL this is. Kind of like jazz put to poetry words. Sorry your computer has been acting up. Next time I am at PFT, I'll let folks know! Daver Austin February 28, 2017 at 9:10 AM How good to hear from you. Word jazz is a great name for this sort of stuff. When you sit around most of the time, you wonder about things like Mardi Gras abd old times. Love, daver

Connie Marcum Wong February 27, 2017 at 4:36 PM Mardi Gras fun and wild abandonment are celebrated in the creative expression you have shared in your wonderful mélange of colorful passion Daver. I love it! I hope they televise some of the fun tomorrow. ; ) 7 Daver Austin February 28, 2017 at 9:14 AM Good to be back. Not sure how my computer will work. Poetry Soup wants to change browsers and I screwed up trying to change, so if my old window doesn't work later on, I'm in trouble again. Love, daver Connie Marcum Wong February 27, 2017 at 4:38 PM Mardi Gras....my kindle always changes my words and I often miss it. It is so frustrating! ; (