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2/13/2025 for Pick-A-Title, Vol 49 Poetry Contest, sponsored by Edward Ibeh

The universe grows with such momentum, galaxies go where the big bang sent 'em - expanding forever. Bully for the universe, but I feel I'm going in reverse, fearing something worse with no hope whatsoever. I feel I'm not growing, but shrinking, and I feel that I must be sinking, see? Galaxy-size problems loom, and I can feel impending doom. Will gravity one day consume me? Universal expansion, I don't begrudge, yet, I myself cannot budge, and as I give up all resistance, Newton's force has me thrashed, one by one my hopes are dashed, and I am slowly, surely smashed into one point of non-existence.

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Date: 2/13/2025 11:26:00 PM
Unless you reappear in another dimension, which I hear are endless. I hope you have a long continuation. And continue writing poems, no matter where you find yourself.
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David Crandall
Date: 2/15/2025 3:51:00 PM
Thanks Hilda, yep, I've read about the muli-verse, and things like that - pretty confusing - or pretty far out.
Date: 2/13/2025 3:35:00 PM
Shrinkage deffo a bummer. Hang in there big guy
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David Crandall
Date: 2/13/2025 4:11:00 PM
That poem was a bit dismal. I hope to bounce back in my next one :-)

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