Imploring Time

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FROM MY ROOF GARDEN. MY PICTURE, (c)

The mighty Time, I once implored More hours to each day to add For I wish myriads of minutes to enjoy Holding you in my arms, my love! (c) Demetrios Trifiatis 04 July 2016 Happy National Holiday Day to my American friends.

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Alexis Y.

Date: 7/5/2016 1:25:00 AM

Hi Demetrios, I enjoyed reading this piece. It expressed a love that we all would like to have one day. Excellent job! 7:-) Alexis P.S, Happy Holiday to you too! I have been enjoying the pictures of the lovely flowers you have been posting lately.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/4/2016 7:10:00 AM

- A beautiful and romantic poem, my friend - Topped with a beautiful floral image from your garden .... love it - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/4/2016 8:13:00 AM

Thank you dearest Anne-Lise for your precious and gracious comment!

Gary Bateman

Date: 7/4/2016 6:10:00 AM

Herr Professor!! This "infinite number of minutes" you allude to are so very, very important. Very Romantic indeed. And Happy Fourth of July to you too!! (Ich bin Amerikaner und ein Veteran -- Many Thanks for your greetings to your American friends. Also, today is my father's 93rd birthday. He was a World War II veteran.) Besten Dank!! Gary

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/4/2016 7:51:00 AM

Mein freund es ist wunderbar ihnen zu sehen! Danke! Yes, I know you are a veteran and for that you have my eternal respect! Happy birthday for your father, the hero, of the WWII! God bless him! My father also fought in the war and his brother died fighting that is why I was named after him: Demetrios. Happy fourth of July, my friend. Thank you for your visit and comment!