Impersonal

Whey faced and ashen
Trouser leg rolled up
Jagged shinbone jutting
With a ragged grin.
Words tumbling 
From a mouth
Shocked and numb
Sitting stiffbacked
In the dentist's window
Facing the street
Two women busy
Mothering the casualty
Until the ambulance.
Outside unrelenting
Lay the pavement
 On a freezing Friday
Ice glinting coldly
And unconcerned.
Inside an old  soldier
Never before
Brought low in battle.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Makama Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 11:01 AM
Great and lovely poetry... Happy new year!
Bruce Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 4:26 PM
Thank you for your kind words.May you have a happy and prosperous New Year and may your God be good to you
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