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"IMPATIENT SOUL" FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, 27 OCTOBER 2017, MY PHOTO,©

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Death's breeze he has felt

Eternity's gates he saw

Impatient grew soul!






©  Demetrios Trifiatis
      27 October 2017


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Leon Enriquez

Date: 11/1/2017 10:28:00 AM

Dear Demetrios: A doorway to immortality each soul must waltz into... Leon

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/29/2017 10:22:00 AM

Maybe because he knows of the beauty that awaits him. Lovely write, my dear. Lovely photo a well. Filakia

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/27/2017 7:59:00 PM

His soul is longing to go home Demetrios... a beautiful spiritual haiku. Lovely, comforting and inspirational. Enjoyed! P.S. That's a gorgeous photo of yours accompanying your poem...

Maria Williams

Date: 10/27/2017 7:30:00 AM

Yes -who would not get impatient after glimpsing Eternity's Gate? An Inspirational Haiku dearest Demetrios ,one that sends out Hope...Maria xxx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 10/27/2017 6:29:00 AM

Much insight Demetrios. Thumbs up.Regards.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/27/2017 6:13:00 AM

Another thoughtful moment --thanks for sharing Demetrios!

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/27/2017 6:03:00 AM

Hallo Herr Professor!! Enjoyed your Haiku here very much. Fear not Death, for Eternity`s Gates cometh. (Currently now in Stuttgart for a short-while, back home next week . . . .) Best Always, Gary

Silent One

Date: 10/27/2017 5:59:00 AM

I do not fear death my friend, I feel in death we find the truth.. Very poetic lines..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/27/2017 5:56:00 AM

- One should not fear death - Death comes like a friend - "One day you die. All other days you will live. " - Lovely written, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/27/2017 5:54:00 AM

Yes,this is a masterful write my friend! I really loved the way your wrote this intriguing poem here this morning! You have written a tremendous piece, one full of the point of death towards the eternity, forever resting place! What a harmonious piece, Great Work!!