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"IMPATIENT SOUL" FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, 27 OCTOBER 2017, MY PHOTO,©

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Impatient Soul

Death's breeze he has felt

Eternity's gates he saw

Impatient grew soul!






©  Demetrios Trifiatis
      27 October 2017


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Enriquez Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 10:28 AM
Dear Demetrios: A doorway to immortality each soul must waltz into... Leon
Manassian Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 10:22 AM
Maybe because he knows of the beauty that awaits him. Lovely write, my dear. Lovely photo a well. Filakia
Ashley Avatar
October 27, 2017 at 7:59 PM
His soul is longing to go home Demetrios... a beautiful spiritual haiku. Lovely, comforting and inspirational. Enjoyed! P.S. That's a gorgeous photo of yours accompanying your poem...
Williams Avatar
October 27, 2017 at 7:30 AM
Yes -who would not get impatient after glimpsing Eternity's Gate? An Inspirational Haiku dearest Demetrios ,one that sends out Hope...Maria xxx
Chakrabarty Avatar
October 27, 2017 at 6:29 AM
Much insight Demetrios. Thumbs up.Regards.
Pandit Avatar
October 27, 2017 at 6:13 AM
Another thoughtful moment --thanks for sharing Demetrios!
Bateman Avatar
October 27, 2017 at 6:03 AM
Hallo Herr Professor!! Enjoyed your Haiku here very much. Fear not Death, for Eternity`s Gates cometh. (Currently now in Stuttgart for a short-while, back home next week . . . .) Best Always, Gary
One Avatar
October 27, 2017 at 5:59 AM
I do not fear death my friend, I feel in death we find the truth.. Very poetic lines..
Andresen Avatar
October 27, 2017 at 5:56 AM
- One should not fear death - Death comes like a friend - "One day you die. All other days you will live. " - Lovely written, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sivey Avatar
October 27, 2017 at 5:54 AM
Yes,this is a masterful write my friend! I really loved the way your wrote this intriguing poem here this morning! You have written a tremendous piece, one full of the point of death towards the eternity, forever resting place! What a harmonious piece, Great Work!!
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