Impatience

Scent of cinnamon
Heat's gentle rise to soft dough
Tongue’s temptation burns
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Marcum Wong Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 5:37 PM
Congratulations on your high placement with this senryu that makes the tongue salivate to have a taste Joseph!
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April 26, 2017 at 8:30 AM
The perfect recipe for a wonderful Haiku. Now I am hungry for some fresh hot cinnamon rolls.
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April 26, 2017 at 11:45 PM
many thanks... probably should have classified as Senyru...
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