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Impatience

Scent of cinnamon Heat's gentle rise to soft dough Tongue’s temptation burns

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/26/2017 5:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your high placement with this senryu that makes the tongue salivate to have a taste Joseph!
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Date: 4/26/2017 8:30:00 AM
The perfect recipe for a wonderful Haiku. Now I am hungry for some fresh hot cinnamon rolls.
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Joseph Soper
Date: 4/26/2017 11:45:00 PM
many thanks... probably should have classified as Senyru...

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