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Impatience

IMPATIENCE it’s spring gloomy day and i watch from the window strange quiets and excitements hang in the humidity like ghostly, long caged voices the green explosion has destroyed winter’s hold, silenced the screaming, and impatient nature awaits a late burst of sun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/4/2014 6:22:00 PM
Hi you guys my first chapbook of Poetry is now available! I am really excited to be published and I will keep going and creating more work. Currently working on my next book which will be full length. Go check it out! https://www.createspace.com/4418272
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Date: 6/9/2014 4:32:00 PM
Yes, I know spring was ready to come forth..Great descriptive and expressive work..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara
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Date: 6/7/2014 2:45:00 PM
Hey Daver!! "Impatience" by ourselves, but nature seems to take it all in stride. I'm happy your cats got their fiddles.:) Sunny here though breezy (thank goodness). Hope all's well with you all, Daver! Love, Mikki
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Date: 5/19/2014 3:03:00 AM
Hi Daver. This is a really cool write. Great imagery and theme. Thanks for sharing :)
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Date: 5/18/2014 2:41:00 PM
love this lovely piece, Daver. Hope you are doing well, my friend
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Date: 5/18/2014 9:54:00 AM
Daver great double tanka, wonderful image....David
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Date: 5/17/2014 2:57:00 PM
Dear Daver, How glad you must be that "winter's hold" has left now. Beautifully written tanka. I guess I would be impatient for a "burst of sun" if I lived in Michigan too. LOL Now I pray for rain. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/16/2014 11:33:00 PM
this is SO cool, daver. love the words: green explosion and "long caged voices" As for Guy Loranger, he did try to locate me by phone a few years after I lost him. But I was a new mother by then. . . .
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Date: 5/18/2014 10:51:00 AM
Guy's loss for sure. Love daver

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