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Impatience

Victims claim the well must be capped Zapped off by their hands two times clapped But oil will still leak While their talking heads speak Logic tapped from minds that have snapped Author's note: Are the people on this site too high class to know about the clapper? I thought this was funny????

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Karl Marszalowicz

Date: 2/18/2013 8:01:00 AM

The ground work is done for a fine limerick, may I help? How about: Victims claim the well be worked on by cappers Zapped off by their hands two time clapper-ed But oil will still leak While their talking heads speak Logically tapped minds, sit back eating snapper

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2011 2:43:00 PM

Where are you from , Duke? It has got to be a cultual thing. I am not high class by any means, but for me, clap means either to applaud or also the name of a sexual disease!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/29/2010 7:46:00 AM

Just stopping by today to thank you for all your comments. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Duke. Happy New Year to you and yours. Love, Carol

Gavin Pattison

Date: 6/14/2010 8:08:00 AM

Very powerful use of words, Regards, Gavin.