Impatience!

Mr. Webster defines "impatience" as a dislike for anything causin' delay.
Alas, my paucity of patience I am reminded of each and every day!
'Tis a subject upon which the Lord and I are in constant consultation.
Lord, help me in my quest for more patience is my earnest supplication!

On Sunday morns I squirm in my pew listenin' to the preacher pontificate.
His interminable oration goes on and on - for my football game I'll be late!
Again that very afternoon I lose all patience with my favorite football team!
Their fumblin', stumblin', bumblin' play just makes me want to scream!

I have little patience with slow movin' traffic causin' me to lay upon the horn!
Others extend a finger in response! (As I understand it, that's a sign of scorn)!
I impatiently wait for the leaves to blossom on my trees around the first of May.
In the autumn season, my patience is taxed rakin' those infernal leaves away!

I lose patience with the government always intrudin' in my life,
With their inane and meddlesome schemes that are so very rife!
I'm impatient with folks who babble on and on when a word or two will do,
Or retellin' a story I've heard a dozen times - 'tis a classic case of deja vu!

Forgive me Lord when at times I even become impatient with Thee.
If impatience is a sin, Lord I pray that You'll show mercy unto me!
Help me in my quest to be more patient is my earnest supplication,
But won't You please expedite Thy accomodation is my exhortation!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/10/2010 4:47:00 PM
This is a hit on impatience. Spit the rhyme Bob spit. This is good!
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Date: 11/9/2010 3:35:00 PM
Another great write, Bob. Got a real laff. Pleasant read. Great job. Ralphie
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Date: 11/9/2010 4:46:00 AM
I repeated this paucity of patience poem aloud this morning as my morning prayer, Bob. 'tis well understood! Well done....Lord please give me patience....right now! Please! Seems the only way He has answered my prayer concerning that is to give me situations whereby I had to practice at it. Dang! Enjoyed prayin with you this morning. : )
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Date: 11/8/2010 1:49:00 PM
Funny stuff....enjoyed
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Date: 11/8/2010 9:05:00 AM
You surely know how to make us laugh, Bob. Although there's really an important message in learning to be patient, I cracked up reading your last line, my friend. What a delightful poem! (I'd probably be praying for the preacher to wrap up the sermon so I could see football too!) Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/8/2010 8:51:00 AM
Well Bob my friend u took the words right out of my mind and mouth .. this piece I can so relate to in every verse ... awesome as usual and a great read to begin my afternoon of work.. enjoyed my friend with lots of luv..
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Date: 11/8/2010 8:22:00 AM
it is a wonderful subjectively written poem
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Date: 11/8/2010 5:21:00 AM
Nice positive thoughts with humor peeping in the last quatrain, Bob
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Date: 11/7/2010 11:58:00 PM
An honest and piquant narrative, robert.. i do get impatient a lot as well.. great write! warmest, nette
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Date: 11/7/2010 7:02:00 PM
A poetically humorous piece, Robert. I understand your thoughts completely as I too am patiently challenged and pray for rapid expedition. :-)
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