Laurie Ginn Poet Rhyme

Impassioned Plea

Problems insurmountable
Walls of sand unclimable
Sinking deeper
Just let me breathe
 
Where is the rock I stand on
From where is my peace drawn
Come Father I need to believe
 
Wrongs be made right
Give me the will to fight
Your strength Lord is all that I need
 
I know what my faith is made of
I know of your undying love
Give me something my pain to relieve
 
My cries to you unending
So much time I’m spending
And still now my spirit grieves

Send your tender mercies
Don’t let evil hurt me
Great Jehovah please intercede 

January 2009

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Michael Degenhardt February 26, 2009 at 10:02 AM This reads like a personal prayer, a plea to God for assistance. It is wonderfully penned as it speaks directly and with clarity. Michael

Adell Foster January 17, 2009 at 6:35 AM Laurie this is such a beautiflully penned prayer for intercession. I know the Lord has heard your prayers and shall surely for righteaouness sake intercede to alliviate the wrongful woes. Thank you for sharing the read and for your lovely comments on "I'll Walk The Naked Miles" I am most appreciative. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell

John Rhinem January 16, 2009 at 5:01 PM Smile~"He Will!!"~But, what makes myself think, that You somehow already know this dear lady!~"Hello Blessed & Precious Laurie Ginn!"~I have glimpsed a few of "Your Wonderful Writes" as of late~and my soul always finds joy at the end of everyone of them!!~"You Are A Treasure Given To This Place At Soup By 'God Himself!'"~So, "Keep Shining Brightly Dear~My Love To You & All You Love, Always, John!"~Bye Laurie:)

Frank F. Atanacio January 16, 2009 at 12:23 PM Wow I feel the power and I feel the strength of the Lord great write wonderful

Christopher Higgins January 16, 2009 at 9:24 AM This is a very strong write. You have poured your heart in this piece and it yells loudly. Wonderfully done. Thanks for commenting on my work..greatly appreciated.

Robin L. Gass January 16, 2009 at 8:30 AM We will both keep praying for this, Laurie! I love this heart felt and beautifully written poem! I will write to you over the weekend. Mat God bless you always. Love and hugs, Robin

Sharon Winter January 16, 2009 at 4:25 AM May all your prayers be answered dear friend. Warmest wishes. May your days soon be lighter and brighter. Love, Shar