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Impassioned Plea

Problems insurmountable Walls of sand unclimable Sinking deeper Just let me breathe Where is the rock I stand on From where is my peace drawn Come Father I need to believe Wrongs be made right Give me the will to fight Your strength Lord is all that I need I know what my faith is made of I know of your undying love Give me something my pain to relieve My cries to you unending So much time I’m spending And still now my spirit grieves Send your tender mercies Don’t let evil hurt me Great Jehovah please intercede January 2009

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Michael Degenhardt

Date: 2/26/2009 10:02:00 AM

This reads like a personal prayer, a plea to God for assistance. It is wonderfully penned as it speaks directly and with clarity. Michael

Adell Foster

Date: 1/17/2009 6:35:00 AM

Laurie this is such a beautiflully penned prayer for intercession. I know the Lord has heard your prayers and shall surely for righteaouness sake intercede to alliviate the wrongful woes. Thank you for sharing the read and for your lovely comments on "I'll Walk The Naked Miles" I am most appreciative. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell

John Rhinem

Date: 1/16/2009 5:01:00 PM

Smile~"He Will!!"~But, what makes myself think, that You somehow already know this dear lady!~"Hello Blessed & Precious Laurie Ginn!"~I have glimpsed a few of "Your Wonderful Writes" as of late~and my soul always finds joy at the end of everyone of them!!~"You Are A Treasure Given To This Place At Soup By 'God Himself!'"~So, "Keep Shining Brightly Dear~My Love To You & All You Love, Always, John!"~Bye Laurie:)

Frank F. Atanacio

Date: 1/16/2009 12:23:00 PM

Wow I feel the power and I feel the strength of the Lord great write wonderful

Christopher Higgins

Date: 1/16/2009 9:24:00 AM

This is a very strong write. You have poured your heart in this piece and it yells loudly. Wonderfully done. Thanks for commenting on my work..greatly appreciated.

Robin L. Gass

Date: 1/16/2009 8:30:00 AM

We will both keep praying for this, Laurie! I love this heart felt and beautifully written poem! I will write to you over the weekend. Mat God bless you always. Love and hugs, Robin

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/16/2009 4:25:00 AM

May all your prayers be answered dear friend. Warmest wishes. May your days soon be lighter and brighter. Love, Shar