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Impasse

My oars were broken I couldn't sail, I was at an impasse, alone but you came along and mended me, with your craftsmanship, now we are in sync sailing together as one, in the ocean blue Contest: Metaphor Of Love Poem Sponsor: Bobby May 11/5/19

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Date: 11/14/2019 8:53:00 AM
Excellent Alexis, why didn't you enter it in my contest a 1st place for sure! well done!!
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Date: 11/6/2019 9:43:00 AM
beautiful metaphor...wonderful penning Alexis...i liked this one :) hugs
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Date: 11/5/2019 1:37:00 PM
Aw, what a wonderful metaphor, Alexis. Bobby's going to mine this one's 'ore,' and you are going to sail away with a top finish in the contest. ~ Gypsy Ball Gersh
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Date: 11/5/2019 10:06:00 AM
aww Alexis this is so touching I think Bobby will love this one:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/5/2019 9:14:00 AM
Sounds like a beautiful voyage to me Alexis. Keep sailing those calm and comforting waters my friend.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/5/2019 9:15:00 AM
Ooops, best wishes in the contest. :)
Date: 11/5/2019 9:06:00 AM
A beautiful love poem, Alexis..a win for you.
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