Impasse

My oars were broken
I couldn't sail, I was
at an impasse, alone
but you came along
and mended me, with
your craftsmanship,
now we are in sync 
sailing together as
one, in the ocean blue






Contest: Metaphor Of Love Poem
Sponsor: Bobby May

11/5/19
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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May Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 8:53 AM
Excellent Alexis, why didn't you enter it in my contest a 1st place for sure! well done!!
Adams Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 9:43 AM
beautiful metaphor...wonderful penning Alexis...i liked this one :) hugs
Wolf Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 1:37 PM
Aw, what a wonderful metaphor, Alexis. Bobby's going to mine this one's 'ore,' and you are going to sail away with a top finish in the contest. ~ Gypsy Ball Gersh
Allison Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 10:06 AM
aww Alexis this is so touching I think Bobby will love this one:-) hugs Jan xx
Green Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 9:14 AM
Sounds like a beautiful voyage to me Alexis. Keep sailing those calm and comforting waters my friend.
Green Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 9:15 AM
Ooops, best wishes in the contest. :)
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November 5, 2019 at 9:06 AM
A beautiful love poem, Alexis..a win for you.
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