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Immutability

Nightfall comes to everyone, Midnight is inevitable, The door closes and we’re gone, Times ahead are profitable. Midnight is inevitable, Twilight harbingers our clocks' halt, Times ahead are profitable, We transcend from a vault. Twilight harbingers our clocks' halt, We stand at the end of the bridge, We transcend from a vault, We go past every siege. We stand at the end of the bridge, The door closes and we're gone, We go past every siege, Nightfall comes to everyone. August 26, 2022.

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Date: 8/29/2022 9:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this great verse. Many blessings my friend
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Date: 8/29/2022 12:32:00 PM
Thank you, Eve. I'm honoured.
Date: 8/28/2022 10:17:00 AM
Congrats on your win Thompson, Very nicely done
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Date: 8/28/2022 5:41:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph. It's an honour.
Date: 8/26/2022 9:14:00 AM
I like this pantoum very much - the repeats really work well here.
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Date: 8/26/2022 4:32:00 PM
Thank you, Jeff. I'm glad you like it.

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