Thompson Emate Poet Pantoum

Immutability

Nightfall comes to everyone,
Midnight is inevitable,
The door closes and we’re gone,
Times ahead are profitable.

Midnight is inevitable,
Twilight harbingers our clocks' halt,
Times ahead are profitable, 
We transcend from a vault.

Twilight harbingers our clocks' halt,
We stand at the end of the bridge, 
We transcend from a vault,
We go past every siege.

We stand at the end of the bridge, 
The door closes and we're gone,
We go past every siege,
Nightfall comes to everyone.




August 26, 2022.

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Eve Roper August 29, 2022 at 9:57 AM Congratulations on your win with this great verse. Many blessings my friend Thompson Emate August 29, 2022 at 12:32 PM Thank you, Eve. I'm honoured.

Joseph May August 28, 2022 at 10:17 AM Congrats on your win Thompson, Very nicely done Thompson Emate August 28, 2022 at 5:41 PM Thank you, Joseph. It's an honour.

Jeff Kyser August 26, 2022 at 9:14 AM I like this pantoum very much - the repeats really work well here. Thompson Emate August 26, 2022 at 4:32 PM Thank you, Jeff. I'm glad you like it.