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I didn't really see a sub category pertaining to this write. As you all know poetry in it's self is subjective. This is where my muse took me Enjoy:-) Alexis

Immunity

I came to one conclusion 
all that we see is an illusion 

Tic Tock  ….. Tick Tock

As I run around the block 
I got my finger on my glock

Tic Tock …. Tick Tock

I walk da streets immune 
to shock

You think you know me
Like you my real homie

As I begin to contemplate
You fake as they come 

So step and get out my
FACE

And run for your life like you're 
in a race


7-29- 18

angstrhyme

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

August 2, 2018 at 10:04 AM

Sista souljah ... hit us w/straight right cross truth! GREAT poem, Alexis. Love the grit and grind of metallic ink flowing from your gat pen. Love and more love always.

Andrea Dietrich

July 31, 2018 at 6:40 PM

An interesting way to see life through another perspective. Yes, I hate when we can't find the subcategories that fit our poems. They need so many other different ones!!

Robert Lindley

July 29, 2018 at 9:19 PM

Loved, I mean loved every word of this creative and wonderful piece my good friend.. A fav..

Alexis Y.

July 29, 2018 at 9:31 PM

Thanks Robert, I really appreciate your support. A fav? Wow. If you have the time can you read my poem"Terrified "? Thanks in advance. PS, I will visit you soon:-)Alexis

Eric Boddie

July 29, 2018 at 11:15 AM

completely thugged out....but theres always a better route....and i do understand no one wants to be a punk....and theres always a bully somewhere trying to chunk....negativity upon your path....and that is why i Let God Handle my wrath....didnt see that coming alexis....lol