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I didn't really see a sub category pertaining to this write. As you all know poetry in it's self is subjective. This is where my muse took me Enjoy:-) Alexis

I came to one conclusion all that we see is an illusion Tic Tock ….. Tick Tock As I run around the block I got my finger on my glock Tic Tock …. Tick Tock I walk da streets immune to shock You think you know me Like you my real homie As I begin to contemplate You fake as they come So step and get out my FACE And run for your life like you're in a race 7-29- 18

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 8/2/2018 10:04:00 AM

Sista souljah ... hit us w/straight right cross truth! GREAT poem, Alexis. Love the grit and grind of metallic ink flowing from your gat pen. Love and more love always.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/31/2018 6:40:00 PM

An interesting way to see life through another perspective. Yes, I hate when we can't find the subcategories that fit our poems. They need so many other different ones!!

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/29/2018 9:19:00 PM

Loved, I mean loved every word of this creative and wonderful piece my good friend.. A fav..

Alexis Y.
Date: 7/29/2018 9:31:00 PM

Thanks Robert, I really appreciate your support. A fav? Wow. If you have the time can you read my poem"Terrified "? Thanks in advance. PS, I will visit you soon:-)Alexis

Eric Boddie

Date: 7/29/2018 11:15:00 AM

completely thugged out....but theres always a better route....and i do understand no one wants to be a punk....and theres always a bully somewhere trying to chunk....negativity upon your path....and that is why i Let God Handle my wrath....didnt see that coming alexis....lol

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/29/2018 9:47:00 AM

I hope that is a name for a new fangled clock *lol*.

Alexis Y.
Date: 7/29/2018 9:31:00 PM

Lol! Thanks for stopping by Richard:-) Alexis

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/28/2018 9:58:00 PM

Wow, I loved this! I mean I really do, but even if I didn't, any woman holding a Glock, I am gonna really really really agree with her!!!! LOL

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/28/2018 4:39:00 PM

A Glock ?, wow ,you're not a girl to be messed with Alexis lol. Tom