Immortality For All Eternity

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Sotto Poet.


Each life creates its own eternity. Living a life worth remembering is the first step. By Poet
We were sick and tired of the rife. This harsh planet is fled to fend for itself. But wait! We recognize another life. We shall sway the earth but not strife. We wobble much like a dying star. Our souls go deep to the surface. Our minds bide a dull fluid at night scar. Like a liquid over an etheric furnace. I long for days filled with hearty praising. The ley, trees, and beck were once one. Consistently, earth heeds to be reeling. It's rung by a halo of a bold cosmic sun. The tone of whim and the vivid reaction. A ripe one might not exist anymore. I can glide wherever, lacking inhibition. I'm unfit to rate the topics I've got before. All we are is drowsiness and apathy. As we rise in the womb, our Souls grow. Not void, but souls unveil God's mystery. We emerge not naked but with fate's glow We are to cite birth, life, and death. Bounties beset us when we are young! Loss shapes creep on the kid as growth. Youth can note the light and find clung. We shall die, but be unalive. What does this mean to us? A lender can be unused to contrive It's the fruit of one else's cuts. The soul cannot last long in the body. Earth life has a whiny brat on the soul. Only life can advise people to die godly. Humans need eternal faith to be cool.
3Rd Place Contest Winner Written: April 19 If I Were Immortal Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/24/2022 8:10:00 PM
Immortality is something which we cannot achieve as long as we are with the body. Only when we die, our soul will be able to fly away to eternity. To facilitate the soul to enter eternity, we need eternal faith... ! Beautifully thought out and composed, dear friend
Login to Reply
Date: 4/21/2022 12:17:00 PM
To live a godly light, is to live life righteously and as perfectly as we can- our hearts and souls however, are on show all our living life for the world to tell or betray us. Nobody is perfect, but try try and try again! We are being watched and would all like to reach the pearly gates. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/20/2022 11:27:00 AM
lasaad, enjoyed reading. My love for God, has always led my life even with the hardest pain, he has eased my heart.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/20/2022 4:56:00 AM
You are right, Lasaad--our deeds while living make life worthwhile. And those worthy deeds outlive us to create our legacies.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/20/2022 1:43:00 AM
I certainly accept God's providence that our soul will find bliss in Heaven, yet death still provides us with some fear. Our fault really. Great poem Best for a win.
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter