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Immortality

IMMORTALITY

When you look into your daughter’s brown eyes 
And see  the eyes of your own mother long gone
But  still smiling there,   and understand that she
Too will hear  something of you in her own son’s sighs;

When you pass a bearded hobo in a thunderstorm
Standing on the bridge and in a flash you see that the world 
Is filled with such people, and that Christ himself 
Also stood like that on the road to  Jerusalem;

When you hear a nightingale and marvel as you realize 
That all nightingales have sung the same song 
From time immemorial;
Or see a butterfly and admire its colors in surprise 

As Roman soldiers did before battle for Rome’s fame; 
And know that your daughter’s daughter will chase 
Almost the same butterfly around some 
Future garden of perennials, almost the same;

When time ceases to have meaning  for you
Because you realize instinctively that you see and feel
All the same experiences people have always felt :
Then,  with the universe you become one and true  -
 
And you live forever.

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(Theme = Cosmic Consciousness)
Written By Sydney Peck
Entered in Debbie Guzzi’s Contest    DeLIGHT, Good Vibrations

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/16/2012 6:46:00 AM
very nice poem......congrats on your win
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Date: 7/14/2012 4:47:00 PM
Wonderful and Beautiful piece,Sidney..Congratulations on your superb win...Great job...
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Date: 7/14/2012 6:05:00 AM
Congratulations on the win Syd. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2012 4:42:00 PM
a cosmic wonder, KC... i toned my piece to give way to you since you really need to raise your points, lol... jkidding!... your first stanza pulled me in!... congrats on your win..a great sense of poetic thought all the way..:) huggs!
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Date: 7/13/2012 4:07:00 PM
Amazing and true...isn't it funny how the threads of the universe knit us as one. Syd...a special congratulations for a well-developed theme placed with flowing words...I hope that I imitated my Christian ancestors too (with their best of behaviors). I hope that I chased the same butterflies too!...love, gwendolen
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Date: 7/13/2012 2:37:00 PM
There is such wisdom and comfort to feel in reading this beautiful poem, Syd......you have put into words the emotions I have often struggled in defining.. I love this.
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Date: 7/13/2012 2:31:00 PM
Sidney congrats on your win...David
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Date: 7/13/2012 1:11:00 PM
Truly a magnificent poem. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/9/2012 8:00:00 PM
Yes Syd this is better for the contest, the other though a good write I couldn't really feel LIGHT in a postiv sense..this is much more pleasant though the other did focus on revelation. Light & Love
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