Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Verse

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02.05.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Immortality -

                                 Angelically controlled power
                                                           quiet, fading
                                 Eternal life 
                                 lacking references -

                                 Hypothetically obscurity
                                 Endangered vulnerable hearts
                                              -  triumph yet to come
                                          truths we cannot scorn

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Duke Beaufort May 9, 2025 at 12:03 PM Anne-Lise, your poem expresses the possibility of an afterlife in the nicest and most positive way I've ever seen. Most religions have very specific beliefs, but it's hard to believe that they can all be correct. What you have is very uplifting and sweet for people with faith on this topic. Smiles!!

Sotto Poet May 3, 2025 at 7:03 AM Anne-Lise, your lines are lovely, and the artwork you selected is stunning. How you've organized your words! The writing is really easy to read! Good luck with the contest

Ink Empress May 3, 2025 at 6:38 AM " triumph yet to come" that line stood out the most for me dear anne Lise, i also love the picture and the way your words are arranged! In a way that can be read at such ease! Pleasure visiting you today! Best wishes! Sending you light always

Mystic Rose Rose May 2, 2025 at 7:31 PM May you win every time you try Anne, in every corner of life, Happy Weekend dear Anne-Lise Andresen May 3, 2025 at 2:19 AM - A nice thought, Vie Rose ... but then life would be boring ... many thanks :) - hugs

Lin Lane May 2, 2025 at 2:30 PM I don't know what the contest is about, nor do I care... Your lines are beautiful, and your chosen painting is exquisitely forlorn, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen May 3, 2025 at 2:20 AM - Thank you very much for reading, Lin :) - hugs