Immortality

Ancient philosophies insist on Immortality,
Theologies hold of its unavoidability;
As many old religions, so thought Christianity:
That Immortality is God's gift to humanity.

Reincarnation - charmingly the Indology holds,
Life, death, and rebirth cycle of Samsara bold unfolds;
How happy I am to be born as a lotus or rose,
Yet, lo, at the thought of their tentativeness, I repose.

Existentialism has evoked my thoughts rather deeply,
The nullity and barrenness of the birth-death chiefly;
If so why, in this world, do I need to live this life hard?
When I know the cruel death char and make everything marred?

I get dreams, sometimes, I am dead and solemnly buried,
Angels carry me; to Abraham's lap I am hurried;
At other times I am like chicken or mutton roasted,
Within endless ovens of deepest hell till exhausted.

I see my coffin in the womb of the earth just breaking,
Some seed, within me hiding, getting fervently cracking;
Me growing into plants unknown, springing and blossoming,
Pollinating, growing, spreading out, and keep creating...

In the end, lo, I do not know anything about it.
Yet, again, if I might try in my own words to put it:
It's like asking the taste of honey to a newborn kid,
How can it be said before, at least once, not tasting it?

Yet, do not wait, dear people, to taste immortality!
It's lying here! In everything! Taste it sumptuously!
Love! Go on loving! Get loved! Hated! Go limitlessly!
Gain whatever you want to gain out of this life! Fully!


Edited on 9 September 2021
For ''I'' Contest New or Old Poetry Contest.
Sponsored by: Constance La France
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La France Avatar
September 15, 2021 at 5:26 AM
Christuraj, congratulations on your win in my "I" contest with this beautiful poem, well done ~peace and tranquility _Constance
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September 11, 2021 at 11:38 AM
WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. Your "IMMORTALITY" is a creative story/write. Your pen was working overtime. Have a blessed day/weekend.................
Poet Avatar
September 11, 2021 at 5:25 AM
Congratulations on winning the contest, Alex. Well deserved with this great poem.
Biswas Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 7:22 AM
This is an amazing one. I loved it through and through. This deserves a win. Beautiful! _Dyuti
Alex Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 10:14 PM
Thank you very much.
Hawkins Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 10:25 PM
What a great Poem. Good luck in the contest Christuraj. Take care Shirley
Alex Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 7:10 AM
Thank you very much.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 8:56 PM
This needs to go straight to the top of this contest "Love! Go on loving! Get loved! Hated! Go limitlessly! Gain whatever you want to gain out of this life! Fully!" Wow!
Alex Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 7:09 AM
Thank you very much.
Buehler Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 11:05 AM
Profound and touching thoughts on immortality, Christuraj. You've created an impressive contest entry. Good luck.
Alex Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 11:54 AM
Thank you very much.
Balasubramanian Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 4:17 AM
Last five lines superb. loved the thoughts expressed in them.
Alex Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 9:50 AM
Thank you very much. Your comments matter to me very much.
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