Immortality

Ancient philosophies insist on Immortality,
Theologies hold of its unavoidability;
As many old religions, so thought Christianity:
That Immortality is God's gift to humanity.

Reincarnation - charmingly the Indology holds,
Life, death, and rebirth cycle of Samsara bold unfolds;
How happy I am to be born as a lotus or rose,
Yet, lo, at the thought of their tentativeness, I repose.

Existentialism has evoked my thoughts rather deeply,
The nullity and barrenness of the birth-death chiefly;
If so why, in this world, do I need to live this life hard?
When I know the cruel death char and make everything marred?

I get dreams, sometimes, I am dead and solemnly buried,
Angels carry me; to Abraham's lap I am hurried;
At other times I am like chicken or mutton roasted,
Within endless ovens of deepest hell till exhausted.

I see my coffin in the womb of the earth just breaking,
Some seed, within me hiding, getting fervently cracking;
Me growing into plants unknown, springing and blossoming,
Pollinating, growing, spreading out, and keep creating...

In the end, lo, I do not know anything about it.
Yet, again, if I might try in my own words to put it:
It's like asking the taste of honey to a newborn kid,
How can it be said before, at least once, not tasting it?

Yet, do not wait, dear people, to taste immortality!
It's lying here! In everything! Taste it sumptuously!
Love! Go on loving! Get loved! Hated! Go limitlessly!
Gain whatever you want to gain out of this life! Fully!


Edited on 9 September 2021
For ''I'' Contest New or Old Poetry Contest.
Sponsored by: Constance La France

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 9/15/2021 5:26:00 AM
Christuraj, congratulations on your win in my "I" contest with this beautiful poem, well done ~peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 9/11/2021 11:38:00 AM
WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. Your "IMMORTALITY" is a creative story/write. Your pen was working overtime. Have a blessed day/weekend.................
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Date: 9/11/2021 5:25:00 AM
Congratulations on winning the contest, Alex. Well deserved with this great poem.
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Date: 7/27/2021 7:22:00 AM
This is an amazing one. I loved it through and through. This deserves a win. Beautiful! _Dyuti
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Date: 8/2/2021 10:14:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 7/26/2021 10:25:00 PM
What a great Poem. Good luck in the contest Christuraj. Take care Shirley
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Date: 7/27/2021 7:10:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 7/26/2021 8:56:00 PM
This needs to go straight to the top of this contest "Love! Go on loving! Get loved! Hated! Go limitlessly! Gain whatever you want to gain out of this life! Fully!" Wow!
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Date: 7/27/2021 7:09:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 7/26/2021 11:05:00 AM
Profound and touching thoughts on immortality, Christuraj. You've created an impressive contest entry. Good luck.
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Date: 7/26/2021 11:54:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 7/26/2021 4:17:00 AM
Last five lines superb. loved the thoughts expressed in them.
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Date: 7/26/2021 9:50:00 AM
Thank you very much. Your comments matter to me very much.
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