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Immortality

We were miserable and exhausted by the rife. We leave the severe planet to fight for itself. Be patient, though! We admit in another life. Will toss the earth; however, we will not strife. We sway from light to dark alike a fading star. Our spirits run deep beneath the sea surface. Our thoughts are a sort of dull fluid at night scar. Alike a liquid that moves across an unseen furnace. I yearn my days to be linked to spontaneous worshiping. The meadow, the grove, and the creek were once one. Consistently, it appears to me that the earth was spinning. It looks to be engulfed by a halo of a bright cosmic sun. A fantasy's brilliance and freshness sensation. One who existed earlier doesn't subsist anymore. I may coast anyplace I pick, without restriction. I can no longer discover the things that I have seen before. Our being is nothing but slumber and forgetfulness.  As we rise in the womb, our Souls appear in the skies. Souls are the key to God's mystery, not forgetfulness, We do not appear naked but rather with destiny rays. We are liable for our birth, life, and death grim. As we are still in our prime, blessing surrounds us!  The child's growth allows the death shades to creep on to him. Children will detect the glow so they will be able to spot its basis.   We will cease living; however, we won't be alive What is the significance of this for us? A borrower ought not to be utilized to cultivate contrive. It is the result of another person's activities. It takes a lot of effort to keep on developing.  Although nature is eternal, our world is transitory. As previously said, life is an awful feeling. Desire not to be afraid around dying; it is destiny. The immortal soul cannot abide endlessly on the body. The earthliness of life has a dreadful effect on the soul. Only immortality could teach the human to die godly. Humans, as upright beings, require faith in the eternal.
Written: July 17, 2021 ''I'' Contest New or Old Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France
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La France Avatar
September 15, 2021 at 5:48 AM
Lasaad, congratulations on your win in my "I" contest with this wonderful poem, well done and I love your image chosen ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Alex Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 4:35 AM
A beautiful write on this subject. Congratulations on your win!
Agustin Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 11:34 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your thoughts on immortality, expressed in your awesome poetic style. God bless you.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 2:54 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a creative story/write. Love the pretty picture. Have a blessed day with your win...............
Buehler Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 12:22 PM
I love this stirring poem, so beautifully written, Lasaad. I especially liked the fifth verse. The picture is wonderful, too. Blessings, Evelyn :)
Skelly Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 9:11 AM
Tantalizing images but I was captivated by the notion I quote: I can no longer discover the things that I have seen before...
Poet Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 9:55 AM
Thanks, Delice, appreciate your kind words, have a great weekend
Pandit Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 5:44 AM
Great discourse, Lasaad. Much to gleam from this write--enlightening images. All the best.
Poet Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 7:34 AM
Thank you so much dear Vijay your insightful comment shed more allure on the poem, have a blessed weekend
Balasubramanian Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 3:25 AM
Deep with many profound lines. Well penned. All the best for contest
Poet Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 7:35 AM
Thank you so much Rama, your wonderful comment is so uplifting, have a blessed day and great weekend
Kannan Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 3:25 AM
Amazing poetry... Great things to ponder on... Thanks for sharing this thought provoking write...
Poet Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 7:36 AM
Thank you so much for your delightful comment Supraja, it’s really appreciated
Cunningham Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 1:12 AM
Those that believe will see the path he has shone a light on and it is the way to paradise. Well written Lasaad, hope you have a lovely day. Tom
Poet Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 7:37 AM
Thank you so much Tom, your appreciation brings a lot of enchantment to my poem. Stay safe and have a great weekend
Roper Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 10:30 PM
Beautiful photo, Lasaad. Wonderful verse, faith will be the source. Good luck in the contest.
Poet Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 7:38 AM
Thank you so much Eve, your kindest words shed a great allure to this poem. Have a blessed day
Buhagiar Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 9:47 PM
A poem on the end of times. So many diverging ideas. Books have been written about it. The bible makes it clear that the Son of Man will come down in his splendour and separate the sheep from the goats. You wrote a beautiful piece of poetry. Best for a win. Blessings.
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July 18, 2021 at 7:41 AM
Thank you so much dear Victor your words brought good allure to my poem and it’s D’Souza much appreciated. Have a great weekend
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