IMMORTAL VISION

EYES are the light of the body That leads us to light from darkness in & out. EYES are the sun shine that bless us with a vision That pushes us to strive hard to break the ice. EYES are the twinkling stars giving hope That guides us in the dense way to dare dreams. EYES are the ocean of power with pupil & iris That sails us to overcome the floaters to win. EYES are the nest of Nature with eye lids That help us to rest after a tiring time EYES are the treasure with support of retina That propels us to view the wonderful world. EYES are the beauty to our body That presents us with an attractive look Leave it here with magnanimity to someone To have your beauty and be immortal.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/1/2024 9:34:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Tom Woody

Date: 7/18/2024 5:30:00 AM

I "see" where you're coming from Anu. Sweet poem

Anuradha Sowmyanarayanan
Date: 7/18/2024 8:23:00 PM

Thanks for reading the poem