IMMORTAL VISION


  EYES are the light of the body

That leads us to light from darkness in & out.

EYES are the sun shine that bless us with a vision

That pushes us to strive hard to break the ice.

EYES are the twinkling stars giving hope

That guides us in the dense way to dare dreams.

EYES are the ocean of power with pupil & iris

That sails us to overcome the floaters to win.

EYES are the nest of Nature with eye lids

That help us to rest after a tiring time

EYES are the treasure with support of retina

That propels us to view the wonderful world.

EYES are the beauty to our body

That presents us with an attractive look

Leave it here with magnanimity to someone

To have your beauty and be immortal.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Agustin Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 9:34 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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