Immortal New Life

We mortals fight the boundaries of time
as helplessly we rush headlong towards death
like fragile flowers, bloom, then fade and die
we sing and shout, then slowly lose our breath.

Yet God has promised life to those who wait
until that day, when He will come again
and raise believers, bursting from the grave
transformed to bodies new, that never end.

Creator God, who knit us in the womb
has authored every life upon this earth
and Christ, who conquered death, rose from that tomb
to give us life immortal and new birth.

How marvelous to never know decay
and feel invigorated, endless youth
no sickness, sorrow, suffering or pain
we'll glory in God's presence and His truth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Medders Tobechi Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 8:33 PM
Laura, you did an excellent job with iambic pentameter, not to mention that your subject matter has me in tears of joy. We all hope for that change and wait for it with faith. Congratulations.
Leiser Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 10:45 PM
Awe, thanks so much, Janis! God bless you :)
La France Avatar
March 20, 2017 at 3:16 PM
Laura congratulations on your win in my contest ~
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March 20, 2017 at 4:09 PM
Thank you, Constance :)
Daniel Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 7:05 AM
Yes, what an immortal life we have to hope for:) well done, Laura, a 7:)
Leiser Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 1:20 PM
Yes, I agree! Thanks, Jo. :)
Onclaud Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 1:41 PM
laura,i can see through the eternal beauty of this poem ; divinely scribed!...huggs
Leiser Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 3:01 PM
Thanks, Nette! So glad you like this. :)
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 1:36 AM
Beautiful words of truth, Laura...there is no greater love! Lots of luck in the contest and thanks always for your kind visits...hugs, Rhonda
Smith Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 10:30 PM
Til that day, peace be with you Laura...
Leiser Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 10:50 PM
Thanks, Charlie. God bless. :)
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