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Immortal Love

This deafening atrophy, sameness quest though summiting by sound, I so ingest my frailness, owning not His field of blest! This dropping back, or down, would this suggest I tender the renown, and not regress that in my heart, a frown is even test! How do I speak to thee, in guilt's suggest for it be all around, moral's incest ~ and to lose Holy ground, would seem as lest! I love thee so ~ ne'er knowing, only guess that thee are still unbound, and my love guest, nor own the fate's impound . . . . . . . eternal rest!

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Date: 3/2/2012 6:43:00 AM
It is always a pleasure to read your poetry Paula. I want to thank you today for your kind words on my writing. Your words are appreciated more then you know. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/29/2011 9:44:00 AM
Very creative and interesting write on Immortal love, Paula
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