Immortal Love

This deafening atrophy, sameness quest
though summiting by sound, I so ingest 
my frailness, owning not His field of blest!

This dropping back, or down, would this suggest
I tender the renown, and not regress
that in my heart, a frown is even test!

How do I speak to thee, in guilt's suggest
for it be all around, moral's incest ~
and to lose Holy ground, would seem as lest!

I love thee so ~ ne'er knowing, only guess
that thee are still unbound, and my love guest,
nor own the fate's impound . . . . . . . eternal rest!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 6:43 AM
It is always a pleasure to read your poetry Paula. I want to thank you today for your kind words on my writing. Your words are appreciated more then you know. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 9:44 AM
Very creative and interesting write on Immortal love, Paula
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