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Immortal Kiss

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Written February 05, 2025 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ In the depths of my soul, a well bursts forth, a reservoir of ancient echoes and cosmic whispers. Love transcends borders and time, sycamore and lotus were entwined while nightingales serenade the valley song rituals in moonstone rhyme. a tapestry of timeworn tunes and cosmic lore. Her face graces the dark sky, as a moonstone, long-forgotten vows shimmer in the ether. Twin fires ignite in galaxies afar beyond, dragon fire etched our love's sublime zodiac when prophecy's sword stalks the earth Our love is a constellation, forged in the fiery breath of dragons. The world teeters on the brink of prophecy's keen edge, Bound by threads of light and shadow intertwined. As I gaze upon the stars, her silhouette dances. Woven by light-shadow threads. she sways as she peers at the orbs, veiled in drifts of sandalwood and mist feeling the depth of our bond, as I softly exhale your name. Shadows entwined in swirling tornadoes, bittersweet butterfly kisses linger, soft lips meet, sending warmth. Cascading across the skin, a kismet-proof, mystical fetter. Cloaked in veils of mist and warm jasmine scent, absence transforms into a cavern filled with nightingale songs, Echoing through valleys gently kissed by dawn’s first light and even within the katabatic abyss, hope's feather caresses, Whispering tales of eternity beneath emerald skies. Her hollow heart remains an enigma. Laden with the sweet melodies of doves. cooing tenderness across valleys. Kissed by the first blush of dawn. Shivers dance down her spine. And even in the pervasive silence, hope heavenly feather flutters, whimsical whispers of timeless stories beneath brilliant, blooming blue, Over emerald embers, we soar. Her face was filled with a soft lavender scent. Despite her passing, her love persists, through hope-filled caverns, silver cloud embraces us in light. We shared our hearts beyond glass urns Bumping against the seraphic layout of stars, as a kiss that transcends time itself.

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Date: 2/10/2025 11:24:00 AM
SP, I see you used the same musical accompaniment as in "Love thaws in winter embrace." It is a beautiful piece and I can see why you did that. Your poem transcends time and space and makes a kiss into something touching the entire universe. It's quite a pleasure to stop and consider. Smiles!!!
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Date: 2/10/2025 9:21:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your top win! So happy to see you back on soup writing again! Congratulations
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Date: 2/9/2025 9:37:00 PM
A transcending loving Kiss through the universe. How unique and deliberate your metaphors to include the stars and kiss Lasaad. The audio was just as wonderful as your poetic words my friend. Congratulations on a win well deserved by you. Love your creative mind...
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Date: 2/8/2025 6:05:00 PM
Soft, subtle, soulful and yet potent, powerful and piercing, this compelling saga of transcendental, eternal love. Warmest congratulations on your top win, SP
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Date: 2/8/2025 9:04:00 AM
Your emotions and cosmic experiences come to life in a truly interlaced presence of eternal love. Only you can embrace all these to enhance and showcase your breathtaking poem and bring to life 'a kiss that transcends time itself'. Insanely exquisite poetry, Blessings Jennifer.
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Date: 2/8/2025 6:34:00 AM
"As I gaze upon the stars, her silhouette dances" - Beautiful.
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Date: 2/7/2025 4:18:00 PM
Simply beautiful - and written with such sensitivity...
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Date: 2/7/2025 1:54:00 AM
Cosmic connection is entwined with eternal love. What vivid imagery you use, Sotto! I admire how you combine nightingales, dragon fire, surreal echoes and eternal love. Best for a sure win.
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Date: 2/6/2025 5:32:00 AM
- “Make me immortal with a kiss.” Christopher Marlowe - Quotes - An impressive poem, Las :) - hugs
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Date: 2/6/2025 2:01:00 AM
This is so heartfelt and romantic too, I absolutely love the imagery and depth of emotions youv woven in such eloquence dear sotto! I especially love the lines “ as I softly exhale your name. Shadows entwined in swirling tornadoes, ” and the rest of the lines that follow, so brilliant and passionate how youv expressed here a timeless love that only a poet can capture and immortalise through profound words! Pleasure reading this today. Sending you light always!
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