Immortal Flower

She is like a immortal flower
Always in full bloom 
Her presence makes me warm inside
Oh i wish i can hold her soon

Her voice makes my legs go weak
Her touch is amazing too
As she is my immortal flower
Who makes all my dreams come true

I've held her many atimes
Knowing how delicate she is
Her skin is like a petal 
So beautiful soft and sweet

Her eyes are as blue as the ocean
Her hair is as soft as can be
I love it when i kiss her
it makes my soul dance with glee

She is my gourgous Angel
When im with her i know i belong
My life then has purpose
And i know its deffinatly not wrong
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Anderson Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 5:39 PM
A beautiful tribute, Johnathan. Congratulations on your win. ...Jimmy
Freeman Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 9:34 AM
"Congratulations" on your win,Jonathan. Sincere, Agape, Moses
Villarosa Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 2:10 AM
A lovely thought for a lovely lady. A lovely poem you have here Jonathan. Congratulations to your win on the contest. (^_^) Noel.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 6:29 PM
Jonathan, Your romantic tribute to this lovely lady is deserving of your win. Congratulations. Aloha, Connie
Esquire Avatar
February 4, 2010 at 8:02 PM
Dear Jonathan, Congratulations on YOUR well deserved Win in MacMcGovern's Contest "Anything Goes" YOU are a True Romantic to LOVE so deeply Superb Write ALWAYS...HG
K. Avatar
February 4, 2010 at 1:06 AM
Whoever this immortal flower is, she's very lucky indeed to have such a lovely poem inspired and dedicated to her! Congrats on your win :) --a typo on "gorgeous" &"definitely"btw, hope this helps...
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February 3, 2010 at 3:05 AM
Congratulations Johnathan, on your placement in Mac McGovern’s “Anything Goes” Mini-Poetry contest with these loving words. You are in the winners’ circle! Smiles, Dane Ann
Dietrich Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 1:04 PM
Congrats for your placing with this sweet little love poem, johnathon! LUv, Andrea
Johnson Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 7:38 AM
Very emotional love song. Congratulations Joyce
Brown Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 4:51 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest . May you have many more. Love, Carol
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February 1, 2010 at 7:55 PM
Sounds like love. Congratulations on being one of the winners in the Anything Goes contest. Keep on writing. Karen
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February 1, 2010 at 4:45 PM
Congrats Jonathan on your winning poem in Mac's contest.. well deserved win for an excellent write.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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